Thursday, March 15, 2012

Reflection on rough draft. 3-15-12





1) What value are you trying to represent?
The value we did was honesty because we were showing that the person that cheated turned himself in.
2) What do you think your group has done well?
what i think the group did best on was individual jobs that we had to do and filming, everyobe pitched on in ideas while we were recording scenes.
3) What do you still need to complete?
What we still need to complete is the teacher scene. (jakes part)
4) What are you most in need of feedback about? (We want to know if..., We're wondering if this camera angle worked when...etc.)
I think what we most need feedback about it is, the sounds. Everything else i think we did fine on.
5) Identify a challenge your group discovered and faced in creating the film. Focus on a challenge about how to best tell your story. Describe how you dealt with that challenge, including discussions you had, things you tried and decided to leave out, and what you ultimately did to address it.
A problem that we had was when the script was all finished it really wasn't.. we had to change some parts like characters and names and lines, we changed a scene from a classroom to a detention hour to show that the scene is "bad". when we wrote the script the main part was a student coppied and the teacher asks "whos test's are these and why are they both the same?" the tests already have the students name on them. so what we changed was we had the teachers lines change to "both of them need need to stay during break". the video flows and has a nice straight to the point theme.